Fortnightly Poem 1.B (Karen’s)
For my very first personal fortnightly poem I would like to share a poem from my most recent book Angles entitled Six O’clock.
Six o’clock
`It was late afternoon, too early for dinner or sleeping…
This was the lip of the night, the black mouth
he might fall into’ - The Death of Noah Glass by Gail Jones
A sliding sun calls the birds to bed
A blare of red, then surrender
Kookaburras and magpies vie
chortle for the last word
No getting past it—It’s yardarm time
An end and a beginning
Shutting down, closing up, quietening…
Fire, uggsboots, wine
Six o’clock— even the word slides
into a large armchair with a drink
Not that you get to just sit and sip
Six is cooking time, chopping, brewing…
One of the day’s clear edges—a defining time
Unlike ten fifteen or five twenty- three
No other time is so locked in
Breakfast can be from seven to ten or not at all
Now paid work no longer defines the days
lunch is also a moveable feast
The six o’clock drink then, a working mum relic
when you actually needed to wind down:
A drink to mark the end of one work life
and the beginning of another
It is also a sad time – long night looms
the black mouth you might fall into
Because you’re too tired to be busy
you remember. It used to be the start of together time—
our special time, de-briefing time—
mulling about our day, the state of the world
That quiet comradeship I still miss
started at 6.00 with a glass of wine…